assignment 6. composition
The aim of this assignment is to look for some of the basic principles of composition to strengthen your imagery and enforce what it is that you want to say with a photograph.
rule of thirds
Aquarium runner. October 2021. Boston, Massachusetts. Photo by Kelcy Shepherd. 1/200s f10 ISO 200 28mm
fill the frame
Bistro chairs. October 2021. Boston, Massachusetts. Photo by Kelcy Shepherd. 1/20s f16 ISO 800 38mm
viewpoint
Double right turn. October 2021. Boston, Massachusetts. Photo by Kelcy Shepherd. 1/6s f8 ISO 200 28mm
framing
Monica's Mercato Pizza. October 2021. Boston, Massachusetts. Photo by Kelcy Shepherd. 1/50s f7.1 ISO 400 20mm
leading lines
Arborway. October 2021. Boston, Massachusetts. Photo by Kelcy Shepherd. 1/125s f8 ISO 200 75mm
symmetry
North End doors. October 2021. Boston, Massachusetts. Photo by Kelcy Shepherd. 1/40s f4 ISO 800 28mm
foreground and background
Furniture store window. October 2021. Boston, Massachusetts. Photo by Kelcy Shepherd. 1/15s f4 ISO 400 41mm
horizon
Boston skyline. October 2021. Boston, Massachusetts. Photo by Kelcy Shepherd. 1/80s f16 ISO 200 53mm
isolation
Okuda San Miguel sculpture. October 2021. Boston, Massachusetts. Photo by Kelcy Shepherd. 1/40s f16 ISO 400 28mm
reflection
This was a fun and challenging assignment. I approached it by thinking of places I have been wanting to shoot in, taking photos in that area while trying to keep the various composition principles in mind, loading the photos to my computer to assess the number and quality of images I had for each principle, then wash, rinse, repeat. In the end I did four separate photo shoots in completely different parts of Boston and the surrounding area, with the last two being targeted to trying to find horizon somewhere in a city. (Sadly, I feel horizon is my weakest area from this image set. I say sadly because I’m from the Midwest — I love and miss the horizon and am actually going to be out there next weekend so you can be sure I’ll be working on more horizon shots.)
I liked how this assignment started with principles that were sort of building blocks. There were many times I was taking a photo that I thought would illustrate leading lines or some later principle and would realize I was forgetting to use the rule of thirds. Or that I was forgetting to try different viewpoints. I am getting better (mostly) at remember to change my ISO back right away and to pay attention to the settings, and I am getting more and more comfortable using the Manual mode instead of automatically switching back to the comfort zone of the P mode. I learned that reviewing images on the camera is deceptive and that things that look one step underexposed on the camera are usually right on when you view them on a computer screen.
The principles I had to work harder to capture were the ones that involved simplicity and minimalism: foreground and background; horizon; and isolation. For foreground and background, I started with a lot of images that showed depth but also had a lot of clutter rather than a few distinct focal points at various distances. Even the image I eventually chose has more clutter than I’d like. For horizon, I was never able to capture a clean view of land or water meeting sky so I ended up treating the Boston skyline as if it were a horizon. For isolation, I was trying to avoid shooting a New England church spire or some such against the sky, which seemed a little stereotypical, but in the end something against the sky communicated the principle best. (Though I have a shot in mind I didn’t have time to try that would require a tripod and some trial and error. Perhaps for my final portfolio…)
Based on the areas where I had to work harder to get shots that I was happy with, or at least willing to accept, there are some things I should keep in mind in future shoots: How could I simplify this shot? Where is there clutter here that I could avoid?
extras
Monica's Pasta Shop. October 2021. Boston, Massachusetts. Photo by Kelcy Shepherd. 1/80s f5.6 ISO 400 28mm
Monica's Mercato Pizza. October 2021. Boston, Massachusetts. Photo by Kelcy Shepherd. 1/30s f5.6 ISO 200 90mm
Ciao Roma. October 2021. Boston, Massachusetts. Photo by Kelcy Shepherd. 1/400s f8 ISO 400 47mm
Harborwalk lights. October 2021. Boston, Massachusetts. Photo by Kelcy Shepherd. 1/50s f11 ISO 200 28mm
Commercial Street. October 2021. Boston, Massachusetts. Photo by Kelcy Shepherd. 1/60s f5.6 ISO 400 28mm
Sacred Heart Italian Church, North Square. October 2021. Boston, Massachusetts. Photo by Kelcy Shepherd. 1/100s f7.1 ISO 400 28mm
Capitals at the Christian Science Center. October 2021. Boston, Massachusetts. Photo by Kelcy Shepherd. 1/160s f13 ISO 400 28mm
Architectural detail. October 2021. Boston, Massachusetts. Photo by Kelcy Shepherd. 1/200s f8 ISO 200 47mm
Security guard at the Christian Science Center. October 2021. Boston, Massachusetts. Photo by Kelcy Shepherd. 1/320 f10 ISO 200 60mm
Tunnel truck. October 2021. Boston, Massachusetts. Photo by Kelcy Shepherd. 1/250s f11 ISO 800 28mm